Chelsea,The characters are great and the gestures are solid. Two things:1. Use a ball-point pen until I say otherwise.2. No shading. If you do feel the urge, consider light instead of value and local color of a surface. I am more interested in forms than shapes.Were there any other good drawings from this session? I don't need to see a ton - but I can tell from your work already that you are thorough - a 'completer' - and I'd like to see some more fluid, less rigid drawings.