Chelsea,Where the forms here are turned and you're looking to interesting silhouettes, the results are strong.I would point out that you were sitting in front of several workers whose weight was shifting and moving all over the cafe area. Please stay focused on the work - try not to let anything or anyone distract your focus from actively looking for more dynamic poses.The top page has good depth in it - I would be looking more to the workers who are making more extreme weight shifts.
The varieties of hip bending and weight shifting are great. So cute!
Your sketches always have adorable personality : ) I especially like the last page.